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  1. Becky Starlight

    [US] Sailor Stars Viz English dub, DVD & Blu-ray thread

    I wish I could get it to see The true face of Yaten but I can't afford it
  2. Becky Starlight

    You are my world (I might change it)

    Seiya, Taiki, and Yaten are missing their beloved Senshi. They return to Earth to be with them. A stronger enemy attacks. Can they survive this new enemy? S/U T/A Y/M Story. Romance. Drama. Rating will increase as the story progresses. Chapter 1 The story takes place one year after...
  3. Becky Starlight

    To mend a broken heart

    Am I still making errors?
  4. Becky Starlight

    To mend a broken heart

    What did you think of the story altogether?
  5. Becky Starlight

    To mend a broken heart

    Chapter 13 The next day has Fighter sitting on her bed. The package on the table next to her. She gets up to get dressed. Fighter wears a red blouse and black slacks with sandals. She heads to the dining hall. " Hello there, " says Fighter walking up to Healer. " Happy Birthday, " says...
  6. Becky Starlight

    To mend a broken heart

    Chapter 12 Fighter wakes up the next day to see the rose. She reads the note that is in Healer's handwriting. " You love me? " she asks herself. " Is this what Alphia was talking about? " she asks herself. Fighter puts the rose in water and the note in her top drawer. She gets dressed and...
  7. Becky Starlight

    To mend a broken heart

    Chapter 11 The next morning Healer puts the rose in water. She gets dressed for the day. Healer goes to the dining hall to eat breakfast. Maker and Fighter are at the table eating. She sits down and starts eating fruit. " Morning, " says Healer starting the conversation for the first time...
  8. Becky Starlight

    To mend a broken heart

    Chapter 10 A couple of days later Maker is in the dining hall eating. Fighter enters the room. " Hello, " says Maker eying her. Fighter is quiet at first then says, " Hello, " Maker is surprised by getting an answer. She is relieved as well. Maker starts on her duties happy inside...
  9. Becky Starlight

    To mend a broken heart

    Chapter 9 The next day Alphia finds Healer in the garden. She is just looking at pictures this time. Alphia sits next to her. " How are you today? " Alphia asks. " I am good, " says Healer. " Just looking at old pictures, " she adds. Alphia glances over to see that they are of Fighter/Seiya...
  10. Becky Starlight

    To mend a broken heart

    Chapter 8 Alphia goes into the garden. She notices Healer there. " Hello Healer, " she says softly. " Remember me? I am Alphia, " she adds. " Hello, " says Healer looking up confused at first. " You can trust me, " Alphia says. " You like photography? " asks Alphia noticing the camera. " May...
  11. Becky Starlight

    To mend a broken heart

    Chapter 7 A couple of days later Princess Kakyuu is showing Alphia around the palace. They come across Maker and Healer. " Hello Starlights, " she says. " This is Alphia, " she adds. " Nice to meet you, " says Maker. " You must be Healer then, " says Alphia gently taking her hand. Healer...
  12. Becky Starlight

    To mend a broken heart

    Does the story look okay so far? Can you follow it?
  13. Becky Starlight

    To mend a broken heart

    Chapter 6 Maker checks on Healer the next morning. She is asleep curled up in a ball. The blanket wrapped around her. Maker sits in a chair and watches her. Healer slowly opens her eyes. She senses someone in her room. Healer is relieved to see Maker there. " Want some breakfast? " Maker...
  14. Becky Starlight

    To mend a broken heart

    I am thinking of bringing in the mysterious woman into the picture now but not sure how and still need to name her
  15. Becky Starlight

    To mend a broken heart

    Chapter 5 After the visit from Sailor Moon and the other Earth Senshi Seiya's ability to hide his pain is breaking down. Fighter, his female form is having depression and anger issues. She is cutting herself off from her other two companions. Healer knocks on Fighter's door. " Wake up sleepy...
  16. Becky Starlight

    To mend a broken heart

    Might be short but can't think of anything to add to it
  17. Becky Starlight

    To mend a broken heart

    Chapter 4 Fighter has hurt Sailor Moon and is upset about it. She decides to avoid Sailor Moon at all costs. Seeing Sailor Moon and Tuxedo Max will make her pain unbearable. She might accidentally hurt her again. Fighter does as many duties she can. " Coming down to dinner? " Healer asks...
  18. Becky Starlight

    To mend a broken heart

    Would it be too soon to introduce the mysterious young woman? I have to come up with a name. I was thinking of Seiya falling for her. She can change into a cat.
  19. Becky Starlight

    To mend a broken heart

    Chapter 3 A couple of days later Princess Kakyuu sends for her Starlights. There is an announcement she has to make. Fighter, Healer, and Maker stand before her bowing. " I have invited the Earth Senshi and Sailor Moon over, " she said. " When are they to arrive? " asks Healer and Maker. "...
  20. Becky Starlight

    To mend a broken heart

    That is my first 2 chapters. I am not sure how to go with chapter 3. I don't want it rushed or boring.