Any Fanfiction About Neo-Queen Serenity Finding Out About King Endymion's Bonehead Break-up Dream Plot?

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CrystalBard

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Like...I can't imagine Usagi at any age or in any form being thrilled with any incarnation of Mamoru deliberately engineering a break-up to "test their love" or whatever idiot idea he had going on. I'm just not sure how to write it. Something like this.

"Endymion?" (Or "Mamo-Chan?" Assuming she still calls him that)."

Endymion paused at that tone in his wife's voice. Trembling. Nearly on the verge of tears, but being a reformed crybaby, controlling it marvelously, but it'd just take the wrong word to push her over the edge. He turned, walked to her, caressed her cheek. "Are you alright?"

She shook her head. "I received an interesting report from Sailor Pluto."

"I see."

"She sensed a disturbance in the time stream. She asked you what you were doing and you apparently told her that you'd been sending dreams to your past self. Warning him that something terrible would happen if we wed." She stepped back from him. "Want to tell me what exactly that terrible thing is?"

He felt his mouth go dry, realizing every terrible way she could misunderstand that. Centuries of arguments and buried under the rug tensions. "It was only a test."

"Do you remember the state I was in at that age? I do. I watched Queen Beryl's forces murder my friends. Remember that? Right in front of me. They came back, but the pain was still there, Mamoru. I was almost a child. The only thing that got me through was your support. The love I thought you had for me."

"Usagi, you know I love you-"

"Do I, Mamoru? Then, why would you put me-her-my younger self-through that kind of pain? Why would you do that? Just tell me!"

(Not sure where to go from there.)
 
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There's probably fanfiction like this out there, but it would be literally impossible for anyone to read every Sailor Moon fanfic until you find it.

You did just write something -- pretty well, in fact, you do dialogue so much better than I do -- so keep going. If you need an answer, you can have him think there was a predestination paradox, and if she questions why he didn't break it, he could answer that it would endanger what that already have - Small Lady. It's then up to you if that makes Serenity happy (where she believes the manipulation of her past self lets the two of them to be free to write their own future), or if it ticks her off even more that he didn't choose the road less travelled and then she realizes that while his boneheadedness was necessary for them to get together, it wasn't a reason for them to stay together (this not need lead to a divorce, but an estrangement where Endymion has to earn Serenity's love again).
 
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CrystalBard

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There's probably fanfiction like this out there, but it would be literally impossible for anyone to read every Sailor Moon fanfic until you find it.

You did just write something -- pretty well, in fact, you do dialogue so much better than I do -- so keep going. If you need an answer, you can have him think there was a predestination paradox, and if she questions why he didn't break it, he could answer that it would endanger what that already have - Small Lady. It's then up to you if that makes Serenity happy (where she believes the manipulation of her past self lets the two of them to be free to write their own future), or if it ticks her off even more that he didn't choose the road less travelled and then she realizes that while his boneheadedness was necessary for them to get together, it wasn't a reason for them to stay together (this not need lead to a divorce, but an estrangement where Endymion has to earn Serenity's love again).
Thank you. Some interesting ideas.
 

MariaTenebre

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Again I am so sick of people whining about the break up plot (no offense to your personally I just feel this topic has been done to death). Yes the plot was stupid but it wasn't King Endymion's fault nor was it because he didn't love Usagi/Neo Queen Serenity. It was heavily implied in the finale of R especially was that the reason for the Break Up was to bring them closer not as a couple per se as they all ready were but to bring them closer to Chibiusa not so much as Husband and Wife but Father and Mother to her. THat is because atleast in my view and I think the series supports this that the Black Moon Clan invasion and all that happened as we saw in Sailor Stars happened in all timelines and King Endymion knew that Chibiusa would become Black Lady because she did so when he was Mamoru in the past and all of this that happened and did this to bring Usagi and Mamoru close together around her and to bond them to her on an individual level so they could save her with their love of her as their parents not just as husband and wife from Wiseman.

Also I doubt that Neo Queen Serenity would be angry about this anyway. Because she all ready knew why he did this when she found out when she was Usagi in the past when King Endymion told her this along with Tuxedo Mask and the Inners and his reasons for doing so. So it would see like a silly reason for her to have no issue with Mamoru when King Endymion told her this in the past up to the point when he did this in the future and things come full circle.