Help wanted (Super S story mode writing)

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Metaquarius

Lapis Lunaris
Jun 22, 2019
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Hi everyone,
I've been working on a Sailor Moon game modification ("Super S" which is SNES fighting game - Japan only) for quite a while now. This game has a story mode for 6 out of the 10 playable characters. For some reasons, Neptune, Uranus, Pluto and Saturn were never intended for story mode. Now game translation is possible and story mode can be played with the aformentionned characters, writing *new* dialogs is at stake. And this is where I'm asking for your help since my writing skills are almost non-existant.

Story mode plot is plain simple : Sailor soldiers decide to have an all out friendly battle to decide who should be the leader.
Dialog sequences are very short (one or two sentences usually)
> between each character before each battle
> after each battle
> ending

To give you a better understanding, here a link to Sailor Mars translated story mode :
MARS

If you're interested, please leave a comment in this thread.
Thank you for your time.
PS : Link to game mod.
 
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ran

Luna Nova
Feb 2, 2016
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Ooh this looks great! I wish I could help but I have no programming skills whatsoever :( Good luck on the project though!
 

Metaquarius

Lapis Lunaris
Jun 22, 2019
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Ooh this looks great! I wish I could help but I have no programming skills whatsoever :( Good luck on the project though!
Actually, programming is not the issue here. I thought it should be a good idea to let someone else write the new speeches for outers. I'd rather not do it myself considering English is not my primary language and I'm a bit worried about being off-character if you get what I mean.
Sorry if my original post was not crystal clear. ;)
 

Metaquarius

Lapis Lunaris
Jun 22, 2019
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Here is the second draft of Sailor Pluto's script. Feel free to tell your opinions/suggestions.
I have been told she's a composed character so I tried to make her sound less aggressive than the other senshis.

PLUTO vs. NEPTUNE
- Step aside, Neptune. It is not you I'm after.
- I want to test my skills - let me test yours.
(win quote) - Don't underestimate me.

PLUTO vs. URANUS
- This is not the fight that you want.
- You want trouble, Pluto? You're looking at it!
(win quote)- Clear your mind, and think of the future.

PLUTO vs. SATURN
- Sailor Saturn, you have immense hidden power. But you don't know how to control it.
- Will you guide me?
(win quote)- I may have won this battle, but the future is still unclear.

PLUTO vs. MERCURY
- Your knowledge is vast. Do you think you can outsmart me?
- I'll do my best...!
(win quote)- Books alone cannot predict one's future.

PLUTO vs. MARS
- Simple premonitions will not aid you against me.
- Don't make me laugh! You’re gonna get burned!
(win quote)- You must continue to hone your skills.

PLUTO vs. JUPITER
- Strength alone will not win you this battle.
- Even still... I won't hold back!
(win quote)- Even tall oaks will fall in time.

PLUTO vs. VENUS
- Don't stand in my way. I must not waste any time.
- Me neither - I've got a hot date tonight!
(win quote)- Focus on being a leader.

PLUTO vs. CHIBIMOON
- Small lady, it is our time now. [] Let me win or I'll never speak to you again.
- Come on! This isn't fair!
(win quote)- Sorry little one, but I need you to stay down.

PLUTO vs. MOON
- Sailor Moon, we must decide your destiny.
- Right now? -sigh- Can't you see I'm hungry? I could eat a cherry tree!
(win quote)- Your mind is weak, Usagi Tsukino. I will take over from here.

ENDING
I'm Sailor Pluto, the Guardian of the Door of Time!