Decided to do some comparisons of the dialogue of the redub clips to the Viz and ADV subtitle scripts of the Japanese version.
Viz sub translation is in bold.
ADV sub translation is in italics.
Viz redub translation is in normal text.
Clip 1 -
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aPMh2ZZOCzI
Usagi: If only I had... studied a little more... Oh, just die already, you stupid test!
Mamoru: "Hey, that hurt, bun-head."
Usagi: "Ah, sorry..."
Mamoru: "30 percent...!"
Usagi: "Ah."
Mamoru: "You'd better study harder, bun-head."
Usagi: "That's...none of your business! What on earth...? How dare he... What a weirdo.
Usagi: "I should have studied harder. Oh, die!"
Mamoru: "Hey, that hurts, Dumpling Head."
Usagi: "What? Oh, I'm sorry.."
Mamoru: "30 percent!"
Usagi: *no subs for her scream*
Mamoru: Study harder, Dumpling Head."
Usagi: It's none of your business! What's with him?! I can't believe it. What a weirdo.
Usagi: "If only I had studied a little more... Oh, I hate you, I hate you, you stupid test!"
Mamoru: "Watch where you're throwing things, Bun-head."
Usagi: "Uh, sorry..."
Mamoru: "30 percent?"
Usagi:
*she screams*
Mamoru: "Looks to me like you better study harder next time, Bun-head."
Usagi: "Hmph! Well! That's none of your business! Stupid jerk and his purple-pleated pants! What a weirdo."
Clip 2 -
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pS_uDeu_3SQ
Usagi: "Ah! The cat with the crescent moon bald spot."
Luna: "It's not a bald spot. How rude."
Usagi: "It's talks?! The cat...talks... ?"
Luna: "My name is Luna. I have been looking for you, Usagi. Oh, but first I must thank you. I appreciate you talking off the bandage for me. With it on, I can't talk...and it also dulls my sensory powers. I thought I was done for when those kids put it on. But because of that, it led me to you." *she giggles*
Usagi: "Good night."
Luna: "Usagi! This isn't a dream! Usagi! Okay, in that case, I'll wake you up." *she summons the Brooch* "It's a gift for you, Usagi."
Usagi: "Are you serious? This is for me?"
Luna: "Usagi... Right now, strange things are happening in Tokyo..."
Usagi: 'Yay! Thank you!"
Luna: "Usagi, listen! Like I said, strange things are happening in the city. Even the police can't handle what's going on. An enemy has appeared! Usagi! You are the only one who can defeat this enemy. You are the chosen guardian. And your other mission is to find the princess with the other guardians."
Usagi: "Wow, that's cool."
Luna: "You still don't believe what I'm saying?"
Usagi: "No, I believe you. I believe you."
Luna: "Okay then... Repeat the words... Moon Prism Power, Make Up!"
Usagi: "Moon Prism Power, Make Up!"
Usagi: "Hey, it's the cat with the crescent bald spot."
Luna: "It's not a bald spot. How rude."
Usagi: "It talked. A cat... A cat talked."
Luna: "My name is Luna. I've been looking for you, Usagi. Oh, I need to thank you first. Thank you very much. You really helped me out by taking the band-aid off. I can't talk and my sensory powers are dulled when I'm like that. I was having trouble because of that band-aid prank. But thanks to you, I finally found you." *she giggles*
Usagi: "Good night."
Luna: "Usagi, this is not a dream. C'mon, Usagi! Fine then, I'll wake you up! There!" *she summons the Brooch* "Usagi, this is a present for you."
Usagi: "Really, I can have this?"
Luna: "Usagi, there are weird things happening in Tokyo right now."
Usagi: "All right! Thank you."
Luna: "Usagi, listen to me! There are strange things happening in Tokyo right now. An enemy the police can't fight. Usagi, you're going to fight these enemies. You are a chosen warrior. And your other mission is to find our princess with the others."
Usagi: "That sounds sorta cool."
Luna: "You still don't believe me, do you?"
Usagi: "No, I believe you, I believe you."
Luna: "Really? Then say this. Moon Prism Power Makeup!"
Usagi: "Okay. Moon Prism Power Makeup!"
Usagi: "Aah! The cat with the bald spot!"
Luna: "Uh, it's not a bald spot. Don't be rude."
Usagi: "You can talk! No way. How can a cat talk?"
Luna: "Ahem, Usagi, my name is Luna. And you can't imagine how long I've been looking for you. First thing's first, I wanted to say thank you for saving me from those kids earlier today. Not to mention taking that bandage off. With it on, I can't talk, and it dulls my sensory powers. I thought I was done for when those kids put it on, but because of that it led me to you."
*she giggles*
Usagi: "Good night."
Luna: "What are you doing? This isn't some kind of a dream, you know. Come on, stop playing around! Okay, then let me prove to you it's not a dream!"
*she summons the Brooch* "A little gift from me, just for you."
Usagi: Wow. For me? It's so beautiful."
Luna: "Usagi, I need you to listen to me."
Usagi: "Awesome! Thank you so much."
Luna: "I need you to listen to me! Strange things are happening in this city. Even the police can't handle what's going on. A dangerous enemy has appeared. You're the only one who can defeat this enemy. You're the guardian that's been chosen for this mission. But there's more than just that. You also have to find the other guardians, and our princess."
Usagi: "Wow, really? How cool. Heehehee."
Luna: "You don't actually believe a single word I'm saying, do you?"
Usagi: "Oh, sure, of course I believe you."
Luna: "Great. Just repeat the words I'm about to say, alright? Moon Prism Power Make Up!"
Usagi: "Right! Moon Prism Power Make Up!"
Clip 3 -
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rcSyO_piUGQ
Beryl: "Jadeite, have you devised a new strategy to capture more energy?"
Jadeite: "Yes, Queen Beryl, the monster Iguara has made preparations already..."
Beryl: Human possess all kinds of desires. By providing a small catalyst, those desires spill out into a mass of energy."
Jadeite: "And we will take it all..."
Beryl: "All for our great ruler. Very well, proceed carefully."
Jadeite: "Yes, ma'am."
Beryl: "Jadeite, do you have a new plan to steal energy?"
Jadeite: "Yes, Queen Beryl. The monster Iguana has set it up."
Beryl: "Humans have many desires. Just a bit of a catalyst can turn that desire into a very strong life energy."
Jadeite: "And we just take that from them?"
Beryl: "It is all for our great ruler. Proceed carefully."
Jadeite: "Yes!"
Beryl: "Well, Jadeite? Have you devised a new strategy to capture more human energy to offer to our great ruler?"
Jadeite: "Yes, Queen Beryl. The monster, Iguara, has already made preparations."
Beryl: "The foolish humans constantly remain at the mercy of all their ridiculous wants and whims, and by merely providing a minor catalyst to activate them, we can cause all those pathetic yearnings to spill out as a mass of energy!"
Jadeite: "Yes, and once we do, we'll be able to capture all of it."
Beryl: "All for our great ruler. Very well, proceed. But do so carefully, understood?"
Jadeite: "Yes."